tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3170063012983448257.post8023256961595470600..comments2023-11-03T04:36:44.761-07:00Comments on The Restless Kind: W.I.P.: Show and TellIrenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18078694505194875348noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3170063012983448257.post-42084430457240869242009-06-12T00:31:33.386-07:002009-06-12T00:31:33.386-07:00I love the jumping around in time thing. Go for it...I love the jumping around in time thing. Go for it!Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3170063012983448257.post-4531548552360927332009-06-11T19:18:09.244-07:002009-06-11T19:18:09.244-07:00The story is told by the same narrator all the way...The story is told by the same narrator all the way though, it's just that in the second part he is telling the cliff notes version of what lead up to the action of the first and second parts.Irenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18078694505194875348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3170063012983448257.post-45261120357443184652009-06-11T16:17:33.374-07:002009-06-11T16:17:33.374-07:00The only thing that puts me off is if there are to...The only thing that puts me off is if there are too many POVs. Then I feel like the writer is jerking me around.pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.com