tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3170063012983448257.post3608039928648969269..comments2023-11-03T04:36:44.761-07:00Comments on The Restless Kind: Flash Fiction- The Empty Fake Cake CaperIrenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18078694505194875348noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3170063012983448257.post-83952580571675287742009-06-05T09:58:23.519-07:002009-06-05T09:58:23.519-07:00Great caper that! Would make a good tv series. Who...Great caper that! Would make a good tv series. Who would you cast as Pervis, though?Paul D Brazillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12881642426845398389noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3170063012983448257.post-89949447860136479942009-06-04T18:10:58.195-07:002009-06-04T18:10:58.195-07:00Funny ending. Great story. Nice work.Funny ending. Great story. Nice work.r2https://www.blogger.com/profile/15050444327059086880noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3170063012983448257.post-18712912428667211312009-06-04T14:29:32.636-07:002009-06-04T14:29:32.636-07:00Thank you Thank you- I was going for more Donald W...Thank you Thank you- I was going for more Donald Westlake than Richard Stark with this one. There is something about clueless criminals that enjoy.Irenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18078694505194875348noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3170063012983448257.post-19111900160736611782009-06-04T13:21:39.759-07:002009-06-04T13:21:39.759-07:00Pervis has Elmore Leonard potential. Criminally du...Pervis has Elmore Leonard potential. Criminally dumb. Good story. The first and last paragraphs hook you in and tie it off just right.Dana Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01350344882342624735noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3170063012983448257.post-40509893542218269462009-06-04T11:50:26.173-07:002009-06-04T11:50:26.173-07:00Eating a cake while driving will get you every tim...Eating a cake while driving will get you every time. That and a good-looking woman who's an action hero. And a grass whip is a new one on me.pattinase (abbott)https://www.blogger.com/profile/02916037185235335846noreply@blogger.com